Prologue
In the year 2057 a virus spreads across the globe. A virus so strange and so mysterious that there,s nothing you can do if you get it. Within one week more than two thousand people were diagnosed with the virus in the U.S., even more people in other places. Doctors around the world were stumped and were trying to do anything to help. Then all of a sudden they all died. On November 22, over 4,000 people were buried in a special memorial graveyard. The next day an earthquake occurred around the area of the graveyard. And suddenly hands began to arise from the ground. The people in the immediate vicinity knew what was happening, all of the dead had begun to rise from their graves.
When they rose from their graves they were different, horribly different. They had all mutated into weird creatures. They looked relatively the same, but some had horns, some had wings, etc. They also had all received weird powers and with these powers they were wreaking havoc on the world. They had lost all that was left of their humanity. They fought with no regards to their own lives or the lives of their fellow mutants. Many cities had been abandoned in hopes of escaping the mutants. The army couldn't do anything to stop them because of their weird powers. It seemed that all was lost until one day something very strange happened.
It all started in a small town were a couple of mutants were destroying everything in sight. These mutants both had the power of fire and were using it well. They were getting ready to kill one family when they heard someone say,
"Hey, leave them alone. You scum." The mutants turned around to see the fool who had just insulted them. Instead of seeing one fool they saw five.
"You dare to insult us?" scoffed one of the mutants.
"As a matter of fact we do," said the one in the middle. They then charged toward the mutants with awesome speed. Then all of a sudden they disappeared. The mutants looked around confused, then one felt a tap on his shoulder. He turned around just in time to see a fist hit him right in the face. He went flying and when he hit the ground he was dead. The other mutant turned around to face his foes but no one was there. He then looked up and saw all five attackers floating above him. They all raised their fists and hit him at the same time. The mutant didn't have time to react, the instant all five fist made contact he was dead. Then the strangers looked toward the family.
"Oh God, please don't kill us!" one of them yelled.
"Don't worry, we are not going to kill you," said the one in the middle.
"You're not going to kill us," one of them said relieved.
"We did just save your lives remember," said the one in the middle as he was turning to leave.
"Wait, what is your name?" one of the said.
He turned and said, "Logan." They then all disappeared.
These five mysterious strangers were beginning to turn up a lot. They would appear, take care of the problem, and then leave. A week after the first appearance we finally found out who they were. They were saving someone from a small army of mutants, when they were finished they were about to leave when the person recognized one of them. This was when they finally decided to let the world know who they were. The leader of the group was none other then Logan Kraveski, the world renowned army commander.
Logan was supposed to have died in World War III during an attack on a town his unit was patrolling. The enemy had launched a massive air attack on the town. The entire unit had survived except for him. During the attack Logan had ran off to try and get citizens to safety. After the attack his unit went looking for him but couldn't find him. None of the citizens could remember where he went or if he was okay. They searched throughout all the rubble, all the piles of bodies, but they could not find him. They just presumed that his body was probably vaporized by one of the missiles. Yet, he's here now fighting mutants.
The rest of the group includes Logan's son, Jason, Logan's two brothers, Bill and Tom, and Logan's lifetime friend, Chet. Apparently about two months before the mutants attacked, Logan just showed up at Jason's house. He wouldn't say where he had been or what had happened. He just told his son that they needed to go. Then they went to his brother's houses and his friend's house. Each time he would tell them nothing except that they needed to go. He then took them to some secret underground base, only then would he talk. He still would not tell them anything about where he had been, but he did tell them this. He told them that in less than two months from now a lot of people were going to die. He told them about the horrible disease and that anyone that got it would die. He also told them about how they would come back to life as monsters. He then said that he was going to train them to fight these mutants.
At first they were hesitant to believe him and were quick to think that he was crazy, but something deep inside them told them to believe him. After they all agreed to believe what he had said Logan showed them the rest of the base. It was magnificent, had everything they needed. The first floor was where all their equipment was kept and also where their living quarters were. Their equipment was the most high-tech fighting gear they had ever seen. The gloves that they use make their punches stronger and the boots they use allow them to move at superhuman speeds and fly. They also make their kicks stronger. Not all of their equipment was for fighting.
On the first floor they had a huge monitor hooked up to a machine. Logan had explained what it was for, but they were still confused. Apparently, it searched the world for energy levels, put these energy levels into numbers, and told the user exactly where the energy was coming from. They would later use this machine to find energy levels that were abnormal from regular humans.
Their sleeping quarters were also high-tech. They slept in some kind of cryo-chamber that super re-energized their bodies, so they could get a full eight hours in minutes. Logan said they would soon need the time.
On the second floor, there was a huge fighting arena. Logan explained that they would use that often, to train their bodies. Many hours would be spent on this floor, and they would soon hone their skills.
Logan never said anything about the third floor. The only thing there was a huge rock slab that seemed to be covering a doorway. Logan would disappear to there from time to time, and they could never access it. They could not move the rock, so they assumed there was some sort of high-tech mechanism blocking it.
The world felt just a little bit safer since Logan and them showed up. But unfortunately for Logan, times are about to get worse, a lot worse.














Comments
LAWL FURST POAST
sorry, had to do it.
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Just A few pointers/advice...
~It's really good so far, but I suggest you add a bit more dialogue...
~You're misusing the comma (,). For possessive use or contractions, you need to use the apostrophe, which is this: ' (for some reason, an emoticon appears if I put it in parentheses). For example: "There,s" is "There's" or "its" for possesive, turns to "it's."
~Add in a bit more descriptive words, or creative adjectives. Those will make the story not only sound better, but look better. It will help readers create their own images of your story...
Hmm...I think that's it. I love this so far!! Hope to read more!!
And if you want, could you read some of my story? I have several chapters up, a prologue, etc. I need more readers and critiques...
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That was the prologue? I thought that was just the first chapter....
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Very nice, but a few flow problems, update what the above mentions
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Life is a poem,
It ebbs and flows.
Don't care if it pleases others,
And recall that it doesn't always rhyme.
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WINDOWS = Will Install Needless Data On Whole System
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Life is a poem,
It ebbs and flows.
Don't care if it pleases others,
And recall that it doesn't always rhyme.
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